Responsive

re look at the brief
presentation-looking at putting together proposals

Feedback i want
1)is it a good idea? or would something more like a film based promo work better?
2)does it relate to my target audience?
3)does it relate to the channel?
4)which one is better and more engaging?
5)voice over or text on screen?

go through you ideas- tell them the questions first


Feedback:

-50's style one is a better idea
-keep it characters talking then maybe at the end have a voice over to clarify
-could make it more the target audience by making the teenager more obviously teenager and the older one a more specific age.
-use colours like on the itv logo maybe