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I have started animating now, its going okay now i am getting more used to the software. I have not used after effects all that much so i am still learning. 
This is the storyboard made from Aggies drawings. I think they're absolutely lovely!! Aggie had a change of heart though. She thought it might be nicer if we use a typeface rather than hand writing. I agree that it looks nice and professional looking but now its not at all like our original idea with the continuous line that shows that everything is linked together. It still looks nice though and still gets the message across.

We had a crit on Thursday and we took these, we were going to show the animation we have so far but we were in a different room and couldn't really put it on a computer. We got so many positive comments!! Mostly about how beautiful the drawings were which they are! Some people said we should make the drawings bigger but I don't think they realised we were submitting the actual animation not the storyboard. But it did give us the idea to submit some concept art to show it off. 

Here are the comments we got:

• Very professional vibes
• definitely 'winner' potential - such a well adapted and appropriate tone of voice.
• Nice designs, lovely textures, clean and simple - effective.
• We like the combination of typography and book style illustrations.
• Spelt carbon wrong on the seventh image. Otherwise amazing. Perfect tone of voice for the brief - Beautiful as always.
• More design boards to show off this idea because its absolutely lovely.
• Illustrations are so good - can they be presented bigger? Need to give your work and amount of detail justice!
• Nice style, clear to understand
• Really nice style. Simple and gets the point across.
• Beautiful textures. Do you need a statement 1st board?
• Playful. Nice designs - very fitting for brief.
• This made me feel a feeling
• Amazing style and flows really well
• Nice consistent style!
• I've seen you making this and it looks great so far!
• Very professional. Would make a lovely book.
• I love it - looks so professional and consistent

I am really proud of us :) i just hope people like the animation as much as they like the art. We also thought it would look quite nice in a book.