I found this final crit very useful as there was still a lot of things I wasn't sure about and as I am working on my own, I needed to bounce ideas of people.
Together we came up with these changes:
-Audio is fine
-when were talking about £2 for belt do close up on counter and show money piling up
-when talking about carbon footprint maybe close up on bin.
-add sound effects
-possibly music but only if it fits right
-get some close ups
-start title sequence after first scene.
-Make bread just open first then say about bread at the end
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