Responsive

Today we had to show our pitch boards to the class. First of all we had to create some questions that we wanted to ask people. Ours were:
1. Which colours do you think would be best suited for the project?
2. Does it fit the target audience?
3.Do you think the idea is engaging?
4.Are the Pitch boards too plain?
5.Any suggestions?
6.Does it need anything else to show our idea?

The responses we got were actually quite useful:
-Like the infographic idea
-2 minutes might be a bit ambitious but will work nicely
-Like the colour schemes
-Could relate to the audience by using technology in the animation
-Initial idea has potential but fluidity might require a bit too much time for a 2 min piece
-Cool idea
-Single line to signify interconnectivity is an effective solution
-Is it too simple for 2 minutes?
-Could have more coloured/textured areas but always return to the line
-Love the layout of the boards-very professional
-2 minutes might be too long and create too much work.
-Love the idea
-Like the idea of the world unraveling into a human figure
-Explain last bullet point on initial ideas, why column, not sure what it means
-Colour scheme, blues greens browns, shades, earthy brown colours in background
-Any concept work/ideas?
-Isn't too clear what it will actually look like
-I like the 3rd column of colours and 2nd background option
-Not much of a specific idea
-Boards are good
-Bright colours and graphicy pictures would not work for the audience
-What information is going to be presented in your animation?
-Colours- I think you should use greens and browns and maybe a blue if your going to be doing a globe
-2 mins might be too long, motion graphics is quite hard to keep someone interested for 2 mins with pure factual information
-Might be better looking at the minute mark
-3rd colour chart and 2nd background
Boards are nice and professionally laid out. But there isn't much to show about your actual idea, storyboards etc
-I like the simplicity-works well
-It definitely reaches the target audience
-The text could be reduced to make room for more concepts/images


What we have taken from this:
-The animation needs to be about 1 minute (we only but max of two minutes on the presentation cause thats what it said on the brief and we hadn't decided yet)
-Need some concept art/storyboards. I think when we have these, there will be less need for the amount of text because the text was explaining our ideas that we hadn't yet visualised
-Theres a typo on the why column- need to check better next time
-Chosen colours should be greens browns and maybe a blue, from the 3rd set of colours.
-The second background should be used.

It has shown us what people like and don't like and how our pitch boards went down which is good practice to help us figure out what needs to be on them and what doesn't. People like more visual things but a bit of explanation.